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Thursday, August 17, 2017

My writing

chocolate is sweet that how it yummy I want to eat my chocolate those at home cadets really yummy everytime I look at it I'll look at it because I want it so much.

This is my work from last year and this is not so great.

Chocolate is sweet that how it yummy I want to eat my chocolate those at home cadets really yummy everytime I look at it I'll look at it because I want it so much.

This is my work from this year and this is great.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Freedom
    We need to work together next time you do a blog post as there seems to be a bit of trouble with it. Chocolate sounds good.

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